My RefectionOn monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In
lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is
avrage. To make it better I could use more adjectives.
lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is
avrage. To make it better I could use more adjectives.
Check your story for accurate punctuation and sentence structure. Use voice to describe how you were feeling.
ReplyDeleteFrom Mrs Tamatea