lukes efolieo

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Writing exsample

We excitedly sprinted to the humongous sand dunes A.K.A killer. It was extremely complicated to get up crazy dunes because we were tired from big activities and , our feet sank. When we were at the top of killer,it was a breathtaking view of the beach-side. When we zoomed down the unpredictable dunes we sometimes tripped and tumbled making ourselves dizzy.

1 comment:

  1. I like the exciting words i used
    I did everything well
    Not as many exciting words

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