Once upon a time there were three naughty kids and a teacher named Mr McNaught the kids names were Fred Luke and Caleb.
One day they were being extremely bad and they were told to go to the principle's office but they ran and hide.
So the teacher went to the principles office and asked were Fred Luke and Caleb were. The Principle said I have no idea were those silly plonkers are so They went outside in the sun shine to find the trouble some boys.
Fred was hiding in the slide and the the teachers found him so he ran until he got to Luke. Luke was hiding up a tree and Fred but the mean teachers caught the tree so they climbed. Next they ran to Caleb behind the pool but that was silly cause the teachers could them so they ran home.
The next day the teachers thought that the boys were so naughty they got suspended.
THE END.
One day they were being extremely bad and they were told to go to the principle's office but they ran and hide.
So the teacher went to the principles office and asked were Fred Luke and Caleb were. The Principle said I have no idea were those silly plonkers are so They went outside in the sun shine to find the trouble some boys.
Fred was hiding in the slide and the the teachers found him so he ran until he got to Luke. Luke was hiding up a tree and Fred but the mean teachers caught the tree so they climbed. Next they ran to Caleb behind the pool but that was silly cause the teachers could them so they ran home.
The next day the teachers thought that the boys were so naughty they got suspended.
THE END.
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