Expert
- Shows weeks of work
- Audience is very interested
- I've done the work myself
- Research in my words – with my personality in it
- Contains humour(?)
- Interaction with the audience
- Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or videos and plays automatically
Practitioner
- Shows three or four weeks of work
- Research is mostly in my own words
- Information is interesting and in my own words
- Adults have supported me without doing work for me
- Some humour (?)
- Some interaction with the audience
- Audience is attentive and interested
- Speech is clear
- PowerPoint / presentation has large pics and/or video
Apprentice
- Shows about a week’s work
- A little research – some in my own words
- Adults have done some of the work for me
- No interaction with the audience
- No humour
- Poor presentation
- Few pictures
- Mostly reads the info from the PowerPoint / presentation
Novice
- Reads the words on the presentation
- Clearly started at the last minute
- Hardly any info
- Parents have done a lot of it for me
- No pictures or steps
- Research is straight off the internet
- No humour
- Not finished on time
- Untidy presentation
- Speech is not very clear
Wow Luke that was cool what I like about was that the pics were clear.
ReplyDeleteBut next time you could speak a bit louder because i could not here you at the back
Awesome work Luke because I liked it how you choose your P.I. on something that you didn't know much about but next time you could of looked at the audience not the screen and talk louder.
ReplyDeleteWOW that was awesome Luke!
ReplyDeleteI liked how all your pictures and words were really clear. Next time you could speak a bit louder. From Camryn Mabey!
You should speak up a little more.
ReplyDeleteYou had good pics and you should practice your pi more and maybe a little bit shouter.
Cool PI Luke, I liked how you had lots of pictures and not to many words on the screen. Next time you should speak up and look at the audience.
ReplyDeleteSarah ;)
That was a great topic Luke but you need to speak WAY louder! I was at the front but I couldn't hear you at all. I also liked your Olympic background. But yeah your main improvement point would have to be that you need to speak louder.
Jam :(|)
What a great topic to choose with the Olympics coming up. I think there is a lot of amazing, fascinating information that you could have found if you'd started earlier on this investigation. Next time, don't read the information from the slide show. You need to have a script and let us just listen to you and look at big pictures.
ReplyDeleteSam Says.....
ReplyDeleteYou did great Luke I liked how you had quite a bit of info. Next time you could make it longer and speak louder.
AWESOME!!!!!!!
Cool P.I Luke
ReplyDeleteIt was good that you had lots of info.
Next time you could try to speak louder a clearer but other than that good P.I.
From Annaleise
Nice P.I Luke.
ReplyDeleteI am wanting to watch the Olympics as well.
Next time read off a script.
From Cam
noah says ......
ReplyDeletenice work look good PI there were some facts that I thought were different but that might of been me wrong your pics were really good very clear.
Great PI Luke. I really liked your topic it was a really smart choice. Next time speak louder cause I couldn`t really hear you cause Saul was talking. Great PI. Maddi
ReplyDeleteCool PI Luke. I really liked how you had the words up on the screen so every one could see. But next time you could speak louder. Other than that cool PI!! ~Jas~
Great PI Luke. I liked your topic, how it was based about something that is nearly here! Next time you could have had a script, but still had some words on the screen, so we remembered your facts. Other than that excellent PI Luke.
Grace :)
tom says ... it was good how you talked about ifomation that no one would know about things that every one knew about but next time you could speak about.
ReplyDeleteWell done Luke I liked your P.I and how you presented your P.I on your slide it's a bummer the sreecn kept going blue next time you could make there be less writing on the screen and more on paper.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI Luke your topic was really cool but in the future you could speak a bit louder and face the people
ReplyDeleteJaide
That was an awesome PI Luke your topic was really cool but next time face the people
WOW that was so cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool but next time you could Speak a little louder
ReplyDeleteGreat work Luke!
ReplyDeleteLike the topic as well. Next time you could speak a louder and read off a script.
NICE WORK!!!!!
Good effort Luke. I never knew that the only sport in the Olympics used to be a 108m sprint(must have been a very short Olympics) A next step could be have a voice over. I was straining to hear that interesting PI that you made. I now know so much more about the Olympics thanks to YOU.
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Luke, I liked how you did your P.I on something that's coming up it was a very interesting P.I. But next time maybe get a script and maybe speak a bit louder. :) From Ben
ReplyDeleteAwesome P.I Luke great choice for picking your topic and how you presented your P.I but next time you could face the audience while you were talking
ReplyDeleteIt wasa good pi i learnt a lot but I could not hear you.
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